T2+narrative+writing

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“Were are you going?” shouted lila “ i’m gong in to this spooky cave to have a look around” replied kodey “ i don’t think thats a great idea” said lila in a scared voice “ what do you care” kobey mumbled “dont get lost then” lila said worriedly “ ohh just get over it” kobey replied angerly







tuesday 14 june
walt use our senses to help describe in our writing

s.c we can describe what or marshmallow
looks like smells like feels like taste like =description of a marshmallow=


 * __Monday 20th June__**


 * __WALT - identify personifications and use them in our writing__**

S.C. - we can identify the human trait being described we can identify the object being given a human trait we can write our own examples of personification we can explain why this helps to create a picture in our mind

1The wind whispered through the dark and gloomy forest. what is being personified the wind which human trait or quality whispered

2The gardener lovingly added the manure to his crops believing he was making happy flowers. what is being personified flowers which human trait or quality happy

3 As we walked through the scorching desert, the sun beat down on us. what is being personified sun which human trait or quality beat down

4 Time crawled as Tim sat in the hot detention room painfully watching the clock tic. what is being personified time which human trait or quality crawling

5 The lumberjack leveled the many trees into a clearing and his chainsaw sang its deadly song. what is being personified chainsaw which human trait or quality singing

6 When Monica walked through the shoe store, each shiny pair of high heels called out to her. what is being personified the high heels which human trait or quality calling out

7 When the patriots defeated the redcoat army, freedom rang across the fruited plains. what is being personified freedom which human trait or quality rang

8 As Alice searched for her missing pencil, she said sarcastically, “Well, I guess it just walked off of my desk.” She looked at her classmates accusingly. what is being personified pencil which human trait or quality walking off the desk

9. Kelly was so happy that Tom and she were moving in together, but when she walked into her new residence, she dropped her suitcase. She had never seen the inside of the house which Tom’s grandmother had given them, and though she was grateful to receive such a nice gift, the ugly yellow wallpaper in the kitchen screamed at her. She knew she would have a lot of work to do to make her new house livable. what is being personified wallpaper which human trait or quality screamed at her

10 William knew that he shouldn’t have eaten the last cookie out of the cookie jar. He knew that his father loved to eat chocolate chip cookies after work, but William ate the last one anyway. Now as he waited for his father to come home, guilt poked and chewed at William. As delicious as the cookie was, William now wished that he had never opened that cookie jar. what is being personified guilt poked which human trait or quality chewed

//Metaphors// are a way to compare to by saying that one thing is another thing. For example, we say somebody is a //fool//. In
===the past in Europe, a fool was a person who entertained the king or queen by doing silly things. The fool was a kind of clown. He often did crazy or stupid things to make people laugh. So when we call somebody a fool we really mean that he or she is doing something silly or stupid. We don’t really mean that they are somebody who entertains the king or queen. We are using a metaphor.===